I dwell in Possibility –
The poem being initiated by the “I” show that it is highly personal, the poem focuses on the “I.” We can assume that the speaker in the poem is Dickinson herself because she was writing this poem only for herself. This line interests me… I dwell, which can mean linger, in capital Possibility. So she lingers with hope? With potential? I wonder which definition of possibility she is referring to. Or is it a name? That would explain the capitalization. It’s possible that she did it for the sake of emphasis I suppose. This line shows that it’s probably going to be about possibility in a love relationship? Something of that sort.
A fairer House than Prose –
Interesting. So possibility was meant as potential in the first line. I wonder if she purposefully used the word “possibility” in order to throw the reader a figurative curve ball. So she is in a house which is fairer, or better, than Prose. again, strange capitalization. House, Prose… Emphasis again? This line suggests it’s a comparison poem between Prose and her house of possibilities. House… I wonder why she uses this metaphor. A house is somewhere one resides, lives, and as we talked about in class, somewhere which was very, very definite in the life of Emily. Prose, as in fiction writing… So she is doing something, or living, or residing in a better place than fiction writing.
More numerous of Windows –
Windows is the main idea of this line. Her home of possibilities has more windows, windows are objects to look at things from. They bring in sunlight. What else could she mean? She capitalized Windows, the final word of the line, same thing as the last two lines. So her home is that of poetry, poetry has more windows than fiction… What could windows represent? More light, more freedom, it is easier to observe perhaps? She was locked in a home for so long, maybe looking out a window was the only time she ever escaped. I suppose windows would be of the uptmost importance.
Superior — for Doors –
Superior, or better. Once again she’s just clarifying the reader understands the superiority of the possibility home, or poetry, or whatever. She line breaks here, maybe because it’s such a short line she feels it will be too quick and abrupt. Doors… Doors, again, like the windows, are made to leave, escape. But I suppose it could also mean to enter. So how could a door apply to poetry? So many ways to enter it, to leave it… The possibilities, as she referred to earlier.
Of Chambers as the Cedars –
Chambers… By using the word chambers rather than rooms, it envokes a sense of elegance. Chambers and Cedars both begin with C, and each of them are capitalized… I’m not sure if there is anything to that. So in poetry, there is elegance. Straight forward enough…
Impregnable of Eye –
Impregnable, as in cannot be denied? Of the eye… Eye is the first body part used in the poem. So the house is so beautiful the eye cannot deny it’s power, beauty, etc. This is a powerful image as she continues with her metaphor. It seems as if she creates a metaphor and goes with it, like the idea becomes the metaphor itself rather than the underlying meaning.
And for an Everlasting Roof
The key word, capitalized again, “everlasting.” This is no ordinary house. A roof which will last for an eternity. How does this tie into the poetry compared to prose idea? A roof is built to protect the inside. It is a shell, a cover. And it is everlasting, something we can always trust to be there. Does poetry have a roof? Possibly just the cover or shell of it will last forever. How can it last forever, though? I suppose poetry is writting in the mind, in the heart, in the soul… And ideas can never die. Even if the paper has wilted, the ink has been smeared, the idea will live on. Maybe this is the idea of an everlasting roof.
The Gambrels of the Sky –
Gambrels… Isn’t that like a frock of horses? And in the sky? There must be another meaning to gambrel that I haven’t picked up on. Well, again, she capitalizes all of the main words in the line. I think it’s safe to say she simply does it for emphasis. Line break at the end of the line.
Of Visitors — the fairest –
The best people come visit this house. This must be referring to the readers. The people who come read poetry are the fairest, the best, the most spectacular. What else could visitor be outside of the metaphor? Writer, perhaps… But regardless, the people she relates to with poetry are the fairest. Strange that fairest isn’t capitalized. It’s the first end word which is not.
For Occupation — This –
Occupation capitalized, line break, then this. What is “this?” I suppose it is the home of possibility, the poetry, etc. I wonder if this will be explained more in the next line. Once again, I’m drawn to the question, why the line breaks? I think I can safely conclude the capitalization is just to emphasize, but the line breaks? Maybe it’s just a way for her to break apart each new idea?
The spreading wide of narrow Hands
“Narrow?” I wonder why she went out of her way to point out the fact that they were narrow hands, rather than just hands. So this is a strange turn in the poem. She focused solely on the house and describing why poetry is better than prose, but now she paints the image of hands being spread. What could this mean? Spreading hands as in stretching? I wonder if it is spreading wide of arms, or just hands. I’m not sure how someone could spread their hands apart, nor why they would do it. Nothing is capitalized aside from hands, and no line break.
To gather Paradise –
So this explains the last line. It’s someone opening up to grab and pull in paradise. She ends the poem with a line break, which is sort of strange. So the poem concludes with the happy thought of paradise being pulled into the reader.
Observations
The short poem is an extended metaphor comparing prose to poetry.
Every line but the second to last ends with –
The final word of every line is capitalized aside from “fairest.”
No notable rhyme scheme, only a few rhymes which are generally slant.
Short thoughts rather than elegant and drawn out sentences.